Substantially rewritten, the thing I sent you the other day. I was excited at having cleared the mental deck to start writing it, and in my mild euphoria, sent it a day too soon. There were a lot of sloppy, shit lines in there begging for the axe, or the doctor. I obliged the malformed little fuckers, saving the ones I could.
Working on part two now, just thought I’d take a minute to e-check in. Hope your work is going well and you’re whistling while you do it.